Father God Comments

A beautiful prayer, thanks for sharing.

I really like the first two stanzas!

Father God, when I enter mine bodiless form journey I wish that I may reach the 7th level of enlightenment. this is fine, at the end i want to land in the land of Enlightenment. it is such beliefs which make us go on through all the wounds that we have to suffer here on earth..... thank u.. this poem was a great consolation for me. thank u. tony

God and humanity are different. I hope we are on the right branch of life. Thanks for sharing. Keep on writing.

Aileen, such a fine prayer.......

God understands the prayer and helps us very deeply when we surrender before him. Father God is greatest power and supporter for us. An interesting poem is nicely penned...10