Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Father Forgive Them Comments

Rating: 5.0

On that day the sun rose a little late
Or so I thought
A dark cloud lazily sailed around it
Making the sun shine grey
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kelvin karani
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Kesav Easwaran 29 May 2009

A scenic write...but shocking scenes you provide...i would like to call this a movie poem...not forgetting to mention the imagination inside and bitter truths the poem present...congrats Kelvin...10

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*Innocent Angel* 28 January 2009

Wow, nice poem it has alot of feelings in it.

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