Friday, November 20, 2009

Father Figure Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who is this stranger
who knocks hesitantly
upon the screen door
outside my house.
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mariena soares
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Howard Kern 25 November 2009

A heart felt poem that expresses the pain and distance that should not be their. Take it from one of those father figures; it may be that way for you sweetheart, but everyone is different. I just wish your parents could see beyond their own feelings and see what their harsh feeling are doing to you. I feel your pain babygirl. Be strong, you will be starting into young adulthood soon. hope the best for you!

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Allan O 20 November 2009

I really liked this...it feels like it comes from the heart... ~^..^

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