Friday, September 27, 2019

Father And Son Comments

Rating: 4.5

My brother and I
Were born a year apart
I first saw the world
With the sun and the moon
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Anjandev Roy 18 March 2021

This is an excellent representation.....thank u...

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Keith Brown 03 May 2020

A poem that’s very emotive, metaphorical trench into which the poem draws the reader, all of life’s challenges and rewards on the page

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Luo Zhihai 16 March 2020

Family, family, never forget!

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Kesav Easwaran 25 February 2020

A touching poem, Rose Marie. Every family life would have its own story. Gripping narration 10+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 October 2019

A spllediid work! I sincerely appreciate and adore the underlying philosophy! Beautifully put....10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 October 2019

Is this 10 still needed or not? I do not know, but this very touching poem deserves a 10 Full Score and myriad 10´s more God Bless You, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 October 2019

(3) The honest heart of the great poetess has created a profound and touching poem here that I ever read I am deeply impressed by how the poem is structured and I have enormous respect for the great poetess. A really hard poem to respond to, in my frank opinion, but so worth of being read time and again, absolutely. I have to admit that I shed tears every time I read it.... Dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, I am still very much impressed! Thank you for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 October 2019

(2) A great poem about love, life, happiness and tragedy in an intimate family circle is designed here as it really is. Every family has its luck and tragedy, That belongs to life in our beloved family, I reckon. (3)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 October 2019

My father told me ''My love for my children Has all the colors of the rainbow And its breadth is like The limitless sky" ……………. I have quoted the last stanza here. Whatever happens, a father always loves his children, I am sure. (2)

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Akhtar Jawad 01 October 2019

A touching poem, I became speechless!

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 September 2019

Intriguing and heart wrenching narrative brilliantly penned.

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Bryan Smoot 29 September 2019

I love this poem about father son and daughter...Well done Rose...10++

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 September 2019

A heart rending story put into such forceful verse. Loved this poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2019

A sad story between father and son! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 28 September 2019

Touching expression. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 September 2019

Such a staggering write, dear ate Rose. It touches my heart....10++

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Kostas Lagos 27 September 2019

Well, this is astonishing, to say the least!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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