My brother and I
Were born a year apart
I first saw the world
With the sun and the moon
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A poem that’s very emotive, metaphorical trench into which the poem draws the reader, all of life’s challenges and rewards on the page
A touching poem, Rose Marie. Every family life would have its own story. Gripping narration 10+
A spllediid work! I sincerely appreciate and adore the underlying philosophy! Beautifully put....10
Is this 10 still needed or not? I do not know, but this very touching poem deserves a 10 Full Score and myriad 10´s more God Bless You, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin!
(3) The honest heart of the great poetess has created a profound and touching poem here that I ever read I am deeply impressed by how the poem is structured and I have enormous respect for the great poetess. A really hard poem to respond to, in my frank opinion, but so worth of being read time and again, absolutely. I have to admit that I shed tears every time I read it.... Dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, I am still very much impressed! Thank you for sharing.
(2) A great poem about love, life, happiness and tragedy in an intimate family circle is designed here as it really is. Every family has its luck and tragedy, That belongs to life in our beloved family, I reckon. (3)
My father told me ''My love for my children Has all the colors of the rainbow And its breadth is like The limitless sky" ……………. I have quoted the last stanza here. Whatever happens, a father always loves his children, I am sure. (2)
Intriguing and heart wrenching narrative brilliantly penned.
I love this poem about father son and daughter...Well done Rose...10++
A heart rending story put into such forceful verse. Loved this poem.
A sad story between father and son! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Such a staggering write, dear ate Rose. It touches my heart....10++
This is an excellent representation.....thank u...