Thursday, July 6, 2017

Father And Son Comments

Rating: 5.0

for Ryan

There was a time when you
were younger by far than you
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Daniel Brick
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Rajnish Manga 06 July 2017

And you smile as you see those defeated pieces coalesce into the Time of Your Life.... //.... Nicely articulated poem musing about the changes and maturity that comes with growing age. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2017

Ryan was small at that time. Still he can remember experiences gained in life. Because Ryan was still small in stature and giving experience was supposed little to strike. This was amazing truth. But time has changed and Ryan stands still in full stature. Smile of Ryan brings time for life. Such an affectionate son remains in mind of lovable father. Son grows up and father feels fragrance of life. May God bring happiness and fortune for Ryan. This is an excellent poem very well crafted and shared.....10

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Daniel Brick 06 July 2017

Thanks much for your sympathetic response to my poem. I wrote it for fathers and sons everywhere.

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