Monday, October 6, 2014

Father And Son Comments

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My son, young and in love too, and ripples of laughter run
on his face, especially when he's copying his dreams;
and he thinks he is invincible (to be in TEEN, is such a blessing
that embellishes life as fragrance a flower) . Till now he gets
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Roseann Shawiak 23 October 2014

Yes, being a teenager and clueless, what a great time to know everything and yet not have experienced life! Absolutely love this poem, I can identify with it as I have two sons. Remembering their teenage years with laughter and tears at times, a rebellious shade of independence appearing in many disagreements on boundaries and limits. I especially like the last verse, it brings home the decisions you've made throughout your own life and now haunt you, like a cat playing with mice. Totally enjoyed this poem John! Excellent one! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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