Saturday, April 22, 2006

Father Comments

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Father who are you?
Where have you gone?
Did I do something,
something so wrong?
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Logan Rheinst
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John Tiong Chunghoo 23 April 2006

really touched by these lines: This is all that remains, of the life I once had. So very little, I can hold it all in one hand. great poet in the making.

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Brian Dorn 22 April 2006

Logan, lots of questions, very few answers... a very intimate and sensitive write on a difficult subject. Nice job! Brian

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Dianne Stephens 22 April 2006

Thats so sad, but i really like it

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Logan Rheinst

Logan Rheinst

Rochester NY
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