Saturday, April 18, 2009

Father! ! Comments

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F riendly, kind always staying strong.

A nyone and everyone has one
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Steven Iceberg
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Nangula Immanuel 10 August 2009

Awww. that's so sweet! Perhaps you could read mine 'A father's unspoken love'. It's somewhat similar

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Ruth Walters 03 May 2009

I like this one because I love the way you love your father. Oh and by the way, you need an h in there after t... how about 'hear his words, so clever and so wise' or something like that? then it will read f a t h e r Ruth: -)

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awww thats so sweet to write a poem about ur dad

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