Wednesday, November 25, 2009

Father Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'd like to say you love me,
And were always there
But I don't even know you
And I doubt you ever cared
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Lilly James
Dad
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Ency Bearis 30 November 2009

a nice flow to read but a touching poem...a good write....10

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I love the way this poem flows, just how it sounds to read it. It is quite sad though.

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Garima P 27 November 2009

painfully sweet. What were you thinking when you wrote this...lilly James?

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