Wednesday, August 23, 2006

Father Comments

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Wake up to find,
broken bones on barren earth,
face and hands saturated
with this unfamiliar dirt.
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Sylvia Thomas
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Manonton Dalan 25 September 2008

you are blessed to be home again. give thanks. thank you very much for sharing.md

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Dee Daffodil 06 September 2006

Wow....That is very touching. It is one of those poems that leaves you tingling....where all you can say after reading it is....wow! ! ! Very strong feelings provoked by this. It sounds like your father is truly your hero in your eyes. Wonderful write! Hugs, Dee

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