A fatherless
Son goes about
His business
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You wove strands of truth and sorrow and necessity and business acumen in and out of this poem's tapestry and the resulting cloth is very strong and powerful. It will take a long long time before I forget this- -if ever I do. A superior write. 10+++++++++++++++ and I'm adding it to my favorite poems list.
Dear Susan, Thanks for your lovely review.