Saturday, September 6, 2014

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So far, I've seen your cry
Only once in my life

It was on her funeral day
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Cigeng Zhang
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Dear poet, very nice poem. A statue crying into pieces above line gives a exact image on our mind screen. like symbolism, image is literary technique which you used very effective manner in your poem.

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 15 October 2016

Sorry poem, funeral poem. I was nice to read, although I shed tears. Thanks for sharing.

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Cigeng Zhang 22 December 2016

Zwelethu, thank you for your tears and sharing a part of me. Best wishes.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 July 2016

Tears of life! ! Tears of love; and, tears for the dead. Nice piece of work.

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