Friday, March 25, 2011

Father Comments

Rating: 3.2

when i opened my eyes you were there with me
you took me in your hands
your eyes were sparkling
then you said to God
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Fatima Obaid
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Mahtab Bangalee 07 October 2019

it's beautiful loving poem and the love dedicated to FATHER! excellent

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Umar Hashmi 24 November 2015

You wrote this poem when you were in class V and I am reading it when I am in class VI. I very much liked this poem.

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Umar Hashmi 21 November 2015

I also love my father. I wish I could write such a poem for my father.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 October 2015

Verily, a lovely tribute from a lovely daughter to a lovely father Verily, father's love is the second greatest love on earth the first being, the mother's. The relation of a father and daughter is an eternal bliss , a heavenly bliss A virtuous, blissful, and saintly person are you that made you to write the poem on father A lovely poem indeed, Loved reading it, Added to my poem link....10

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 05 September 2015

The poem is nice in content, but to be honest with you, the sloppy language irritates me as an English teacher!

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Susan Lacovara 05 November 2013

Absolutely beautiful...I, too, am a Daddy's little girl...though he passed away 15 yrs ago...I still think about all his love, every single day...and always will, all my life. I invite you to read more of my poetry, as many are tributes to my parents. This was quite simply lovely...I will rate it 10...PEACE

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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

a nice tribute to your father. sealed with love and respect.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 September 2013

Great piece of work dedicated to your father. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Akanksha Bhatt 11 October 2012

vow! its just an amazing poem! i liked it very much! and i love my father very much as you do!

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