when i opened my eyes you were there with me
you took me in your hands
your eyes were sparkling
then you said to God
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You wrote this poem when you were in class V and I am reading it when I am in class VI. I very much liked this poem.
I also love my father. I wish I could write such a poem for my father.
Verily, a lovely tribute from a lovely daughter to a lovely father Verily, father's love is the second greatest love on earth the first being, the mother's. The relation of a father and daughter is an eternal bliss , a heavenly bliss A virtuous, blissful, and saintly person are you that made you to write the poem on father A lovely poem indeed, Loved reading it, Added to my poem link....10
The poem is nice in content, but to be honest with you, the sloppy language irritates me as an English teacher!
Absolutely beautiful...I, too, am a Daddy's little girl...though he passed away 15 yrs ago...I still think about all his love, every single day...and always will, all my life. I invite you to read more of my poetry, as many are tributes to my parents. This was quite simply lovely...I will rate it 10...PEACE
a nice tribute to your father. sealed with love and respect.
Great piece of work dedicated to your father. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
vow! its just an amazing poem! i liked it very much! and i love my father very much as you do!
it's beautiful loving poem and the love dedicated to FATHER! excellent