Tuesday, May 8, 2018

Father Comments

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10 years old was all it took.
You left no note.
You left us all alone.
You broke everything.
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Naila Rais 08 May 2018

So sad.... Keep courage. Almighty is always there to help you... The time will pass by...10 ++ Naila

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Kathy Light 08 May 2018

thank you for your love and support, this poem is based on a friend of mine so shou out her her for being independent.

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Rajnish Manga 08 May 2018

This is an heart-rending story. So much for the daughter to suffer. It's a shame on the name of a father. You basically left us to die. Did you even love your Family? Did you even hear me cry at night? .......New wife, New kids, New life.

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Kathy Light 08 May 2018

Thank you for your comment, a little history about this poem is that it is based on a friend of mine who is better off without her father and is now an independent girl. so this is a shot out to her

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