Too long it was since they first met
She looked when he gazed then the two
Eyes rested in tha same nest best.
As a lyric had found his tone
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there is no word can describe my feeling about your poem i loved the details of the lovers and description of their fate it is amasterpiece
what a great words for a great relatonship... but unfortunatley it is end like that way..... why......why the many of relationships end badly like that but......... you are a poet and you don't get blam for that it is verey good poem for a verey good poet.....
this one really does move the deepest feelings in one's heart. Thousands of words seem to be squeezed harmoniously in thse lines. way to go keep on it