Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Fate Tempted Comments

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Embedded in the sulci Tattooed in the gyri 
Are the ancient times of bonded stolen hours
Mercurial memories of a peculiar passion fiery
Oh how we tempted the fate mischievous 
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Namrata Biswas
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2016

What is it, if not a curse? To rarely see and never to touch! It's neither a protest nor a moan.. a marvelous poem..... your selection of words and the beautiful way of expressions with a poetic flow...... a fine poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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Kishore Kumar Das 24 May 2016

your poem is the real temptation for love...nicely written...

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