Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Fate's Hands Comments

Rating: 4.5

There are so many parts to this girl that you see,
Feigned smiles are only a tidbit of she.
Well-practiced acts doth she show,
But of seams on the heart,
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Yekaterina Bezpalaya
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Khairul Ahsan 19 May 2015

Just now I've read your poem 'Fate's Hands', It's beautiful. And what a beautiful line to end the poem with: 'The girl walked away hand in hand with her fate.'

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Nun Ya Bizness 14 September 2008

To my left is my sorrow and to the right is my fate.

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Yekaterina Bezpalaya

Yekaterina Bezpalaya

Kiev, Ukraine
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