Tuesday, September 25, 2018

Fate Of Man Comments

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Fate of Man
(a poem by Shakil Ahmed)

My heart is groaning
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Earthen man will turn earth again so he should lead life in righteous way. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 October 2018

contd read on now hopefully finally - - - - all go through there seems to be no waiting queue for neither me nor you Wait don't get disappointed a guest is leaving in an hour go have dinner at the counter tell them you are now not on a waiting list come back soon else you will this last chance miss....third step read at my palace walls

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 October 2018

At a precise time(ALL) have to depart DEATH AWAITS ALL OF US SOME LIVE a 100 hundred years now many refuse to die till 95 and some are born ded or a few live half way of an average life of 77 and so the heavens remain fully occupied but the best of all is this you can enter without a call to the Reception counter I went to Toronto the receptionist said wait a day please where at another hotel if you can find one but the Ridelieu... where contd...

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Badarpur, Assam, India.
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