Tuesday, February 7, 2006

Fate In Your Pocket Comments

Rating: 5.0

love, I look so lost
with my eyes full
waiting here for you.
I can tell you now, but couldn't before...
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Gershon Hepner 10 February 2006

I love this poem, especially the last line. Resigned to reality even while pleading that lov be endless. Excellent, Gershon

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