Friday, November 27, 2009

Fate At Play Comments

Rating: 5.0

our gaze...ablaze, as we stare at each others face
by destinty's hate, and a cruel fate
here we both stand, and with a painful realization i now understand
as your arm reaches out to grab my hand...i quickly snatch it back
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krissi b'williams
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

fate plays with us to much sometimes.yeah we make our own fate, but destiny is always underlying 10s..fav 2

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Eyan Desir 05 December 2009

nevewr..you made a typo its never? anyway the poem was a nice read... fate is fate its a must

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Chitra - 30 November 2009

the twists and turns of fate! ..well protrayed

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Kassiah Gervaise 27 November 2009

beautiful, it truely was i can understand this stay with the good work.

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