Fate And Destiny Comments

Very very true,

Great lines nicely crafted with artistic brilliance.

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Excellent poem. Nice work.

Wow poem, No conversation can be better than this conversation.

Interesting poem, nicely written.

Verly, a well crafted poem with the true essence of life

A witty writing with truth and wisdom, carefully and completely comprised in just five lines. Very well done, Sir.

A wonderful mix of the basic forces that chart human life! Who is stronger.... the question remains! Greatly enjoyed Asim!

Another wise rubaiyat, God bless u Asim.

Wow the last line about death is remarkable. Great write.10++

all the four lines at the end are excellently and quite perfectly penned................yes all these thing are in perfect coordination...............very nice piece of work. thanks.

so true so accurately phrased.-10

A wonderful piece, Mohammed.