Saturday, November 1, 2008

Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Not long ago things were just fine
not a care in this world, feelings sublime
suddenly these news came into world,
everything crashed over this young girl
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Jo Lee
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Sarah Wes 23 April 2009

this is a sad poem. a sad yet beautiful poem. you reach to help her...yet there is no way anyone can help her....it is fate.

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i love this man! wonderfully written 10/10

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Ency Bearis 01 November 2008

great poem...nice write...keep on writing... Ency Bearis

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Emily Oldham 01 November 2008

your vocab works really well here... lovely... keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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