Monday, March 26, 2012

Fate Comments

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Stranded in a minefield
of thoughts
Standing where the road forks
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 17 September 2013

a big decision to make. Depends on what one believes. good write

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Eric Cockrell 31 March 2012

make fate your feet, and choice your hands!

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Lawrence H 27 March 2012

Good poem about Faith. I think you should decide on building new road if the old road becomes useless.

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Harindhar Reddy 26 March 2012

I am delighted to read such a poem like this on fate. They most of believe destiny makes our life and it leads us. Anyways, I can see a positive point in your poem, Oh my God chasing destiny is Great Hope......................... Good work post by the poet Alan Walker!

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Dave Alan Walker

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