Fate Comments

Sleeples nights of a waiting heart is beautiful and sad at the same time yet paints a colourful picture. Lovely

I would like to convince you, to try to write more lines 'in this poem, before the last line! The poem is written wanderful!

So true. Wonderful write. Thanks for sharing. :)

great poem, it reminds me of this poem from Rumi: My heart is so small it’s almost invisible. How can You place such big sorrows in it? “Look, ” He answered, “your eyes are even smaller, yet they behold the world.”

Thanks Francois. I have still some more poems to share. I hope you'll read my second poem and please comment about it. Virginia

loved this... i really did. I am forever in awe of your writing. please write more.

Thank you for your comments. See you. Virginia

I like this poem! ! ! .fate is the sibling of human beings! ! ! A g'd poem! ! !

the lines are simple yet effective and the theme is well displayed. keep growing.10

I like this poem alot. It short and simple yet holds alot of meaning