Thursday, September 29, 2011

Fate Comments

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it was not in my fate (kismet)
that my life partner would be with me
on the difficult terrains of life
he would walk besides me
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Renu Kakkar
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Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2011

telling this is very easy...achieving is a myth...savitri is a story told to influence the good morale of bad women reigning the society..i appreciate the pain..it had its stroke on your fate..for me it made me rock hard does not matter if change comes for good or for bad so that i am able to reign..nice write and i like the style of copyrighting the poem-accountancy style-do read mine-A Lemon.Somewhat like yours.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 September 2011

joy disowns from heart as love departs vale of tunes draws black curtain of sorrow, quite poignant, heart breaking, may God bless you,10+++, thanks for sharing

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