Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why is it that I am deemed upon
a sorrowful technology fate?
A lost laptop, unsaved work can be added on
My list of unfortunate events, those now dilate.
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Mysterious Pesudonym Nisha Jalan
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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