Saturday, June 6, 2009

Fatal Spirit Comments

Rating: 5.0

How does it happen, that we together can change so fast
What we thought was forever, now how could it last
My feelings raped daily, against my very will
Love and hate, wanting to live or wishing to kill
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Deborah Cromer
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Nikunj Sharma 24 July 2009

you almost took me to a fight scene between husband and wife....so real your poems are........ this is too good....small typ in the third line, check the spelling of daily...

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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