Fatal Flaw Comments

A sad story of disappointment in love, well articulated and nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful poem with strong emotions.

Anatomy of failure in communication.

wow this is an extremely emotional expression here, but its really interesting and I love it, can you please check out my poem " I seek a friend" I thought you might like it. thank you.

Dear Poet @Petals Azureblue, I agree with you that 'Love should never be a painful thing to do...' - but sadly it is, not too infrequently, these days!

A poem with a wonderful and appropriate caption and a heart breaking conclusion. Congratulations to the poet on this poem's selection as the MPOD! Those who have had the misfortune of having a failed relationship, will hear much of their heart's echo in the poem.

truly said- Each well-intentioned act of kindness becomes a sad memory of a failed relationship/// beautiful poem

Thanks for sharing and hearty congratulations for becoming POD: thank u. tony

Love can turn one’s life around. An inspiring poem of the day. Congrats, Grant for being chosen.....

Thanks for sharing and congratulation being selected for POD.

What a powerful poem. Excellent expression of emotions portraying sorrows. Although I do not share this viewpoint with you, All good things become signs of failure, I do understand the powerful feelings generating this poem. Well written.10+++.

Turning inward as a last defence Indifference as a way of life The peace in giving up The other's decision to quit......very good poem

A gripping poem on love and life. 'Turning inward as a last defence Indifference as a way of life The peace in giving up The other's decision to quit'..is very thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.

'Everything falls apart'. I recall the Yeats poem 'The second Coming', where the centre cannot hold. Some thought provoking lines in this description of a failing relationship.

Deeply piercing and gripping piece on conflict and indifference, that stalemate where neither party wins (or loses) . Excellently written.

Tuning inward! ! As a last defence. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.