Fatal Fall Comments

Poem bringing attention to a serious problem. Along with prayer, we need to take steps to prevent such accidents. Thank you.

TWIMC.... accept my sympathy... great pen Vijay Sai... keep it up! ! !

Great poem. I felt sorry for the child and I pray such incident won't happen in the future.

wow! what a seriously dark poem but then again you should read some of mine. you'll be suprised im only sixteen because i only ever write from experience.

Great mind...great thought...great work...great poem! I love this

I love this piece only that it made me feel sad and sorry for the child and family.gud work

Love it! And how you talk about a tragic incident, Of a Girl that feel down and got hurt(died) . Rest her soul, if a true story.

a heartfelt piece indeed brilliant job sir i am in awe............. thank you for sharing love payal

Way to go, Sir Sai. Very good imagery / Clever..

i always enjoy reading poems such as these truthful another great piece

Very narrative and could feel the pain of loosing blosoming bud!

not bad, not bad at all, it doesn't exacly rime the way i usuauly prefur poetry to but it did have a more then fare plot that togged a emotional string so i give it 4 out of 5 stars

The poem brings out the emotions very well. Good work.

Oh no a sad narrative poem. Coincidentally a very same ting hapend to my mamu's child in india. She drownd in a water tank or hole on her birthday. Sadening but yor poem is remarkably presentd! Kudos.

nice poem...please keep writing ^^

i like it, a story is in the poem

good work mr vijay, , , ,

this a sad poem! i became sad but nice to deliver....

So sad! It's a lesson, that we should be careful. Nice!

Nice attempt, but you should work on your syntax. It sounds more of prose than poetry.