Sunday, November 3, 2013

Fatal Attraction Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh... From mother earths beginning I was there born
My arms forever held in welcome gesture
My backbone rings its annual display as
I stand steadfast, fingered roots grip deep beneath this earth
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Ken e Hall
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2013

full of philosophy and maturity two thing shimmered in my eyes....poem wise thank you sir

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Noreen Carden 11 November 2013

Hello Ken great poem with a timely message if only the powers that be would take heed

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 November 2013

Very philosophical..... food for thought.

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Valerie Dohren 10 November 2013

If only trees could talk, I am sure they they would all agree with you - a great poem, interesting and well written.

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Wahab Abdul 10 November 2013

stunning poetry, i love the diction along with the power of imagination and narration...fantastic poem..

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Valsa George 05 November 2013

Never cut down trees for they 'expel life's oxygen for all' and give succour and sustenance to man and beast! A great write! !

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Ken e Hall

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