Wednesday, December 28, 2005

Fatal Addictions Comments

Rating: 5.0

The new ones come in looking pounded
Beat up and bleary eyed
You can't tell what they are thinking;
About every cure they've tried
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Ray Andrews
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Ernestine Northover 29 December 2005

A very moving poem Ray, expressing what a struggle it is to get away from the 'devil drug' which is all consuming. What a wonderful feeling when you can actually help someone, and see them start a new life. This was wonderfully encapsulated in this write. Very well done. Love Ernestine XXX

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Mary Nagy 28 December 2005

I really enjoyed this one Ray. That first meeting is such an important one. Anyone is lucky to walk into a meeting you're at. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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