She's gone,
Gone with the wind;
Leaving behind only a seed,
and a waterfall;
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Alicia I love poems that keep me interested with each line. And the best ones leave you feeling something. I feel for the person who's gone and you leave me wishing that something could bring her back. excellent
you convey your feelings from your head to paper very good. once again i love the way you end this one. very good