Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Fatal Addiction Comments

Rating: 4.0

She's gone,
Gone with the wind;
Leaving behind only a seed,
and a waterfall;
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alicia cross
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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

you convey your feelings from your head to paper very good. once again i love the way you end this one. very good

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Lee Crowell 28 May 2009

Alicia I love poems that keep me interested with each line. And the best ones leave you feeling something. I feel for the person who's gone and you leave me wishing that something could bring her back. excellent

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Eyan Desir 26 May 2009

Beautiful excellent this gives a good image

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