Friday, August 5, 2016

Fatal Accident Comments

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I felt losing something belongs to me
When I came from womb into the world to be
I clenched my hand but it was not in the palm
So I newborn cried loud in the arms of mom
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mohammad ahmadizadeh
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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 05 August 2016

What is more valuable for any being, than the very life of the being? Beautifully crafted, quite inspiring poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 06 August 2016

Thank you very much dear friend for your in-depth analysis and kind comment.

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Kelly Kurt 05 August 2016

Wonderful. It often takes losing something (Or almost losing it) to gain a more full appreciation

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 06 August 2016

Thank you sir. I am happy you spared time to read my writing and your inspiring feedback always are valuable for me.

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