I felt losing something belongs to me
When I came from womb into the world to be
I clenched my hand but it was not in the palm
So I newborn cried loud in the arms of mom
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Wonderful. It often takes losing something (Or almost losing it) to gain a more full appreciation
Thank you sir. I am happy you spared time to read my writing and your inspiring feedback always are valuable for me.
What is more valuable for any being, than the very life of the being? Beautifully crafted, quite inspiring poem. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you very much dear friend for your in-depth analysis and kind comment.