Tuesday, December 8, 2009

# Fatad Accident Comments

Rating: 3.1

There was no way to escape your smile

My heart was set in free motion
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Sonya Florentino
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Kesav Easwaran 21 December 2009

'Fantasy now seems strange and distant With our nearness creating this friction'... ten words or not, you have expressed best of your poetics especially there in the quoted line...expressions fantasy/distance and nearness/ friction showing beauitiful mutual co-operation...nice work...10

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Indira Babbellapati 17 December 2009

that's a wonderful exercise...whether prize or no prize!

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george george 08 December 2009

Wow, excellent job incorporating all those random words! Reading it, you would never think it was forced or contrived. Very good Sonya!

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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