There was no way to escape your smile
My heart was set in free motion
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that's a wonderful exercise...whether prize or no prize!
Wow, excellent job incorporating all those random words! Reading it, you would never think it was forced or contrived. Very good Sonya!
'Fantasy now seems strange and distant With our nearness creating this friction'... ten words or not, you have expressed best of your poetics especially there in the quoted line...expressions fantasy/distance and nearness/ friction showing beauitiful mutual co-operation...nice work...10