Tuesday, August 3, 2010

**fata Morgana's Stench Comments

Rating: 2.5

Obnoxious stench oozed out in it's crucible glass,
Deceit tried carpeting, mushrooming one's eyes;

Lo! She - duchess of nature's beauty,
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Catrina Heart
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Sahar Sahar 03 August 2010

innovative and powerful poem written in wonderful style 10 ++++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2010

An obnoxious stench oozed out, Yet still you claim to aim screening the oozing flames. ... all done in eloquent way. i m thrilled to have come across such nice poem.. welcome queen of words.....10

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Eyan Desir 03 August 2010

Wondering where does Cartina gets her words lol welcome back good write

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