Fat Mary Comments

funny.. thanks for the invite Milica Franchi De Luri. yea it was probably elves

Hehh! ! ! heh! ! ! this is great fun.. I like reading these kinda narratives.. entertaining, and kinda fixed my dull mode.. these days I am feeling so bored! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... this is good.... lovess shan

Mine of mirth and melody. CP

vow! beautiful poem.nice imagery.voted10 surya

Irene, I enjoyed this so very much, how clever a theme you have given this and the structure is so very very good..... Very entertaining and penned with so much imagery pecked with perfection.... Very well penned... bonnie

Ha, ha how very funny and uplifting. Poor Mary didn't know what happened to her. It wasn't the farmer.............it must have been those aliens.