Friday, February 1, 2019

Fat Boys! Bad Boys! Comments

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Slowly and gradually the match turned in a war,
The players were not playing they were fighting.
It was a body play.
The crowd was divided in two groups,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 06 February 2019

and more: I do not believe nuclear war will occur, and if it does, .....so what? ? ? ? would it be a great loss. maybe 'god' would do better to start over and try to do better! ! ! ! bri (: to MyPoemList

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Bri Edwards 06 February 2019

(cont.) 2 - fat boys in WW2? Hitler & Mussolini against Churchill & Roosevelt? which were bad? all of them? i say not all of the audience were fans or fighters. at least not fighters by choice. now are you speaking of Middle Eastern boys? Asian boys? what ARE brown boys? bri (:

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Bri Edwards 06 February 2019

1 - i would use turned into a war, a play, wolves, not wolfs. i Googled and found this: in a noun ending in f, replace f with ves to make the plural of the noun. [bri does not know if this is ALWAYS true] Examples Calf =calves Thief = thieves Half = halves Knife = knives (sometimes it's applicable to word ends with ‘fe' also) (cont.)

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Akhtar Jawad 07 February 2019

Thanks dear teacher for correcting me once again.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 February 2019

YEAH UR MEMORY IS GOOD AND TRUE U WERE SIR BORN THEN IN1945 To flag it off

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 February 2019

fattiness is quite jolliness in my side I see so many fatties I try to snap them and they call the POLICE another guy so fatty I run slowly they can't catch me I can't run fast enough they not at all so being fatty is a boon too keep the humour up

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2019

A great political write. So incisive and insightful. Yes, these groups will create a war ten times more dangerous than the first. Another brilliant write from a great and clever Poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2019

Hatred! Wickedness! ! The match turned in a war! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 February 2019

An amazing poem.....thoroughly enjoyed the humor...................10

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 February 2019

A thoughtful metaphor!

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