Saturday, February 7, 2015

Fastball Comments

Rating: 4.5

Up to bat, again,
While the bleacher-filled crowd looks on
They know my stats
My 'swing for the fences' stance
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Susan Lacovara
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R.j. Wynn 18 February 2015

evry base is first base and it always wants to hurt us first. good un.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 February 2015

Poem Fastball is very nicely envisioned. Words choice is excellent. Many thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 February 2015

PoemFastball is very nicely envisioned.Words choice is excellent. Many thanks for sharing.

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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