Thursday, April 6, 2006

Fast Comments

Rating: 5.0

Knuckles clench over stitched hard leather.
Hand caresses the hard leather ball.
Eyes focused on the road ahead.
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Sydney Daniels
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Emma Johnson 13 April 2006

A poem of deep insight. You have captured the tension and ease that precede a race. Lovely poem. Susie.

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Duncan Wyllie 07 April 2006

This reminds me of the song called'The Race' by a group called, Yello. Really great piece here. Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 06 April 2006

Sure sounds like the race is on! Great use of words! You are growing by leaps and bounds Syd! Patricia

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