Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Fast Lanes Comments

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It is a season of quick match
No more slow match
We are now on fast lanes
No more marathon race
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Babatunde Aremu
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Bri Edwards 10 October 2013

HURRY UP and write another poem. i've heard of breakneck speed, but i do like era of neck breaking speed. i almost broke my neck today trying to prolong a glance at a woman driving by as i was WALKING (can you believe it!) down the street. of course i am retired so i am in no hurry. thanks for sharing. :)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 08 October 2013

We are in era of neck breaking speed The slow lanes are emptied But the fast lanes are now crowded ah a beautiful line to read and think thank you brither Aremu 10

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Unwritten Soul 08 October 2013

The last line surprise in so logical reason! got a good track to adopt this! _Soul

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