Fast Asleep. Comments

Enjoyable ghost tale.

I love the subtlety with which this subject is spoken of. Well done.

I like this one too.

I like your poetry a lot, but this one is awesome. GBY, Brother Jonathan <

I guess that's rather true, and spooky to think about. GW62

Influence presuposses `influential... the ghost of possibility...

In dreams love is found Love duncan X

Ann, I love this, the message and the flow of the verse. David

This cascades, like a smooth winding brook divides at a riverfork...I Like the triplet stanzaec construction, as well as the rhyme-sound continuation, ....Excellent work, Ann. ~ FjcR ~