Saturday, May 3, 2008
Fast And Fleeted Heart Comments
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Because I haven’t caught her yet,
I’m casting out again letting this silver net
Of lies free to sink and entangle about her
Pinkish knees, where she rests wading
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Sonny Rainshine
03 May 2008
A wealth of expertly crafted lines and images here. My favorite is mollusk tongues. You handle longer lines well; something a lot of poets (myself included) have trouble with. Good work!
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9/13/2025 5:36:11 AM # 1.0.0
i really like this! its descriptive and truthful