Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Fashioned Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fashioned me a heart, where do I start?
passionately create this rare work of art,
one that's made of gold,
doesn't corrodes as it grows old,
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gina layog
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Afzal Shauq 07 November 2010

yours to mine (needed to be bound, bonded) one that doesn't feel the pain, that lasts a hundred lifetime This heart designed as I require.... its really a well written poem, sweet, compositions of words are made really great way..inspiring and heartfeeling..well doen dera poetry friend 10/10 ++++

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Patti Masterman 13 April 2009

I really love your style here. Very refreshing and original.

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Fiona Davidson 31 March 2009

Wonderfully original write Gina...great read thanks...Fi 10++

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