Fashion Icon. Comments

This is wonderful poem. Poet's pen is mightier than Judge's gavel.

five stars : ) I enjoyed. : ) bri

I esp. like 'nothing to fear' and 'no reason to jeer'. I thought 'jeer' referred to a expression of annoyance/disgust. Wrong. But I find it (as a verb) is 'To abuse vocally; taunt.'

(cont.) .....the night off. Yes! Then it is just HER & ME, left to discuss fashion etc. and eat popcorn (and ice cream, OF COURSE) . bri : )

I, Bri, am, OF COURSE, the leader of 'her perfect team'. Usually she gives the rest of the team

line 12: I suggest you check grammarly. com to read the difference between using 'few hearts' and 'a few hearts'. it's subtle, but significant!

The 2nd stanza I don't recall from when you sent the poem to me in a message. Is it 'new' or just 'different' I wonder.

I STILL don't know your meaning for 'caution to stave'. A Poet's Note should not be 'needed' to 'complete' a poem, BUT one surely could help readers sometimes. ;) bri

Asim, I found 3 definitions for 'icon'. Perhaps this one fits best here: 'An important and enduring symbol.' I wonder why you put a '.' (period) at the end of the title. I'm just curious. bri ;)

Everyone wants to be part of perfect dream but who knows what is in the offering, behind that mask and fashion, how is the heart functioning?

These lines says it all 'she's a visual treat, a walking masterpiece, with each step she takes, she captures few hearts.' Full ****

And how they catch rich and fame in their nets. Good poem, Asim.