Fascination Has Run Cold Comments
Jungle man shouting from the top of his voice
Beating at drums his fever in my ears echoes
He is a short fused individual reaching out
Infusing all with rhythmic beat of distress
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An elegant piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely penned and bristling with insight. KNOW IF THE FASCINATION HAS RUN COLD - ESCAPE! A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
You have a very poignant poem yourself. Keep writing poems to keep your freedom. :)
Feelings and emotions are described poignantly and imagery makes the reader visualize the person, The last three lines are thought-provoking. I think it should have been a better idea to leave it to the reader instead of providing notes.
The notes are really for me. I must remember the circumstances that led me to write the poem. I am sorry to distract you from your own musings. Thank you for the advise.
Thank you for your constant inspiration. This one-sided affair is an ongoing process - blessing in disguise you might term it. This guy is really something. He knows his power and uses it over the poet. Tell me, if you could, what is the most beneficial way to treat such a relationship?
Dear Doris these are truly wonderful words with so much meaning. Loved it, saved it, Thank you so much too for your notes.
Lyn Paul: Sure missed you all these years. Poets should keep on communicating as only we can form a steady shelter from the storm - kindred souls.
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7/18/2025 5:16:36 PM # 1.0.0
The depth and the beauty of expression brings to fore a philosophy and a study in human nature. Don't be shackled down by the wrong emotion You cannot touch someone in constant motion