Farther Away Comments

a lovely poem is this one 10/10

I like the imagery of this part. We light a spark and it’s fallen on old leaves of conversation and lit them onto fire In a conversation or a speech a pause is a time for thinking. In this case one might say a pause or time apart when there is no conversation is a time for dreaming.

i like this it good excellent

An excellent modernistic structure encompassed by a theme that I can personally relate create a very wonderful poem for the reader. Good job.