Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Fart (We`ve All Done It) Comments

Rating: 5.0

From deep inside it starts to brew
As it in your tummy passes through
Then at times it just can’t stop
When out the back it just seems to pop
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Vaughn Bekker
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Crystal Bradley 21 May 2010

Hilarious! Ha ha ha ha!

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Ivor Hogg 16 May 2010

A hoot from start to finish.Who has not been trapped in a lift facing accusing glances from the other occupants.When something silent but deadly permeates the atmosphere and akk are suspect

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 10 May 2010

LOL, LOL, LOL- after reading the title of all of your poem, this one stood out first...not that the others are not interesting titles. 'Fart' yes, all have done it...poets must dare write about things that are a fact. Nice images and pleasing end rhymes...keep writing.

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Gertrude Morris 09 May 2010

Haha! Good poem. The minute I saw the title to it I knew I had to read it. I guess it's the immature kid in all of us. Also, the fact that it was still a good poem, and even rhymed, was very impressive.

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loNeLY AnGel 01 May 2010

lol... awww.. u made me laugh..... nice poem

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Joshua Daukei 27 April 2010

this is a good one lol

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