Farming Comments

they wake up to breakfast you see it is a new morning and out on the ground they see frost and at God Fred is scorning....it can be l ost in frost..... no matter how much u work. life, struggle and realities of life. very well portrayed in continuous tense. than ku dear poet. tony

a very fine poem.. so many ideas packed up in one poem.. rhythmic endings ung ung then fly.. y.. you have given so much care to write this poem and struggled hard to make it a wonderful work. cudos to you. thank you very much dear poet. tony

A very well written and descriptive poem on the subject

Thank you for this peek at what farming is like, intense rhythm and rhyming captures the mind and grabs the heart pulling you quickly through the lines of your poem with an inner tension. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

nice one! i enjoyed it

Bravo! A beautiful reservoir of powerful and rhyming words along with a rich imagery! 10+++ This amazing write clearly shows your talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City