It’s time to say farewell dear
I’m anxious but I do not have any fear
Have fun dear all the time there and here
Make sure that you are the poets pioneer
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nice tribute to someone especial. the only thing is that showing the perfect and pure feelings.~nb
Some verses catch me.. time is dead in the land of literature. or.. These lines are sucking up all my power. A great idea and well written. But I think You could use more perfect rhymes. Of course for me it's always a hard challenge! Good luck.
nice tribute to someone especial. the only thing is that showing the perfect and pure feelings.~nb