Thursday, January 12, 2017

Farewell (Translation) Comments

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Jazib Kamalvi
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Suresh Kumar Ek 11 September 2020

farewell to psychologists has a deep inner meaning, get away from peoples, who makes us unpoetic

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 September 2020

Dear Suresh Kumar! I appreciate your refined poetic taste. Thanks for your continuous visits.

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Jack Price 07 January 2019

I like it poet sir.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 January 2019

Thank you so much, Jack Price, You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kostas Lagos 24 February 2018

Well, this is remarkable! A poem worth reading again and again!

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 February 2018

Many thanks, Kostas, for the nice words.

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Anita Khelawan 20 September 2017

This was some very in depth writing and I appreciate every bit of it... Overall this was a good read. Thanks for inviting me unto yr page

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Jazib Kamalvi 21 September 2017

Many thanks, Anita, for your nice appreciation and sincere feedback.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2017

High imaginative write. Presentation is unique and amusing. Let it be quoted.... Every ordinary and specific person has to bid farewell this world at last. Who can count the feathers of a flying bird? Who can discover the sentiments captured within words? Who can see accross the wall except you? It is a best farewell song sung in farewell meeting of Mr. Muhammad Hanif, the psychologist. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 13 September 2017

Thank you so much for your kind favour, sir.

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Unwritten Soul 04 August 2017

This is so nice, the imagery and the language...i feel like this is how Urdu speaker express and i find it beautiful, to find different side of beautiful expression from other cultures. :) Alvida, its not a sad word just a word with full of memory and loves of past...but future will fruit new memories for sure! .

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 August 2017

I am glad to know your comment on my urdu poem. Thank you very much,

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